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I am not happy with the meter of it yet, but I'll tinker more another time...
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2007-04-02 15:12:19 Posted by Mel ()
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I like where you're going with it, Mel! About time you put up another poem. I spotted a couple of typos ("you" where you meant "your" and "prode" for "prod"), but otherwise I think you have a winner here when you get the meter the way you want it.
God bless!
2007-04-02 15:57:29 Posted by Traci ()
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Hi Mel
I really enjoyed your poem.- Great!!
This is amazing! I had a dream last night that a strong hand was on my head. Very strong and soothing. God bless you and have a very Happy Father's Day.
In His Love
Brenda
2007-06-16 15:01:24 Posted by From God's Word ()
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