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    I am not happy with the meter of it yet, but I'll tinker more another time...

    ;'{P
    2007-04-02 15:12:19 Posted by Mel ()

    I like where you're going with it, Mel! About time you put up another poem. I spotted a couple of typos ("you" where you meant "your" and "prode" for "prod"), but otherwise I think you have a winner here when you get the meter the way you want it.

    God bless!

    2007-04-02 15:57:29 Posted by Traci ()

    Hi Mel
    I really enjoyed your poem.- Great!!
    This is amazing! I had a dream last night that a strong hand was on my head. Very strong and soothing. God bless you and have a very Happy Father's Day.
    In His Love
    Brenda
    2007-06-16 15:01:24 Posted by From God's Word ()

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