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    Back on the age thing - if you are a "couple of years shy of 30", that would mean you were about 5 when you wrote this? I know I asked before, but me still no get it!!!!

    Anyway, this is really a good one. I am too scared to comment on most of your poems as my mind just races everywhere. Poems normally originate from deep withn, something you have experienced. I shudder at what some of them actually mean. Your previous ones however show a softer side of you.

    God Bless
    2005-10-19 05:25:28 Posted by Lee ()

    A couple years shy of 30 in the military, but I am 46. (I was 18 when I joined, 10 days out of high school to be precise)

    Never be afraid to comment. If you are afraid of saying something that everyone can read, just send a personal message...

    Thanks for commenting. At least then I know that it is being looked at...

    ;'{P


    2005-11-04 02:55:33 Posted by Mel ()

    I couldn't help noticing the name at the end of the title, was the new guy a democrat?
    2005-11-04 05:47:15 Posted by Ross ()

    ROFL

    Not in particular, but that is up to the reader I suppose...

    ;'{P
    2005-11-04 13:37:51 Posted by Mel ()

    I THINK IT WAS GREAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!IT MADE PERFECT SENSE TO ME!
    2005-11-22 19:12:15 Posted by LOLI ()

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